Re: Has EAv2 and the FA gone down ahead of time?
Posted: Sat Dec 28, 2024 12:18 pm
I think it’s fine. It’s a background for when the kids grew up, and it’s definitely not written in a prurient way.
I’ll get that posted shortly. Easier to do on a computer with a longer story like this.
And I like the story a lot too.
I’ll get that posted shortly. Easier to do on a computer with a longer story like this.
And I like the story a lot too.
mounds_dont wrote: Sat Dec 28, 2024 11:57 am I had a tough time with the fight scene too.
I did try to keep everything within Fantasy Island cannon.
I'll correct the "think o"
Thank you for the review. That means a lot. We can put it away, until "legal" sorts things out.
If it does get rejected, I can always rewrite the kid's portion. Make that "PG".