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Hello everyone

Posted: Sun Dec 22, 2024 8:18 am
by Miss_Sunflower
I figured I'd pop on and say hi, I'm a writer so maybe you'll see some of my stories in the archive.

Re: Hello everyone

Posted: Sun Dec 22, 2024 9:12 am
by WheelyFixed
Welcome, and I'm sure your submissions will be welcome... We look forward to reading them on the other site...

WheelyFixed

Re: Hello everyone

Posted: Sun Dec 22, 2024 9:15 am
by Miss_Sunflower
WheelyFixed wrote: Sun Dec 22, 2024 9:12 am Welcome, and I'm sure your submissions will be welcome... We look forward to reading them on the other site...

WheelyFixed
Thanks, and my first story was just approved and posted! I tried to join the old forum but my account kept getting deleted before it was approved so I never managed to post anything.

Re: Hello everyone

Posted: Sun Dec 22, 2024 1:09 pm
by WheelyFixed
Just read it, overall not bad, but I tend to be a bit of a 'Grammar / Spelling Nazi' and you had enough 'wrong word' and punctuation errors to be distracting.. I'm stingy with my 5 star ratings, so you only got a 4 because of this.

My posted comment on it...
Nice, but a fairly large number of ‘wrong word’ errors and punctuation issues. Basic story line was sound, perhaps could have used a little more ‘backstory’ about the universe, what / why are there all these non-human type characters, etc…
I'd definitely encourage you to submit more stories, but it might be good if you can find a language fanatic to do some final proofreading and editing before submitting them...

WheelyFixed

Re: Hello everyone

Posted: Sun Dec 22, 2024 1:20 pm
by Miss_Sunflower
Yeah editing is the bane of my existence I do need to find someone who is willing to look over my more colorful stories. As far as the lore of the world I have another 14 parts to this story so far and I have some world building in each of them. I’ll go over the rest of the chapters before I submit them though.

Re: Hello everyone

Posted: Sun Dec 22, 2024 1:41 pm
by dandelion
I used quillbot's grammar checker before for my own submissions. It is very helpful! And free!

https://quillbot.com/grammar-check